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Chance Brown
Ms. S. Aiken
English 1101-01
August 27, 2008

Foot to Face: Taste of a Pinkie Toe

We beat the mess out of Zane…it was one of the best days that I have experienced. The day was a Saturday, just an ordinary Saturday, the time was about one o’clock in the afternoon. Work had just ended, all of the students and parents had left, the boss had went home and had given us permission to stay and work on our material if we wanted. With this newly allotted freedom to be left alone unsupervised at the martial arts studio, a group of about four had agreed to stay and work on the lessons of the day, or at least that is what we had said but did not plan on doing.
A few moments after everyone was gone the four of us did work a little on some of the advanced techniques for about five minutes, just in case someone happen to come back for something, so we waited a while and then the fun began.
We began by doing a tag team jiu-jitsu match, which is a form of grappling mixed with wrestling for those who don’t know what jiu-jitsu is. We grappled for about an hour straight and then we all ganged up on Zane. We each alternated who would grapple him and made a contest to see who could make him submit in the fastest time. Once the fun of grappling had passed, we moved to another adventure.
Andy made the notion of sparring but the others really did not want to just spar, so Jonathan stated that he wanted to spar with our weapons and we all agreed. Everyone ran to grab their gear and their favorite weapon. When everyone was prepared it was an all out battle (the weapons were padded by the way). It was every man for him self. This went on for another hour and a half. Then, naturally, we all went after Zane again and beat on him for about fifteen minutes.